Not your best.

I really like your style but this is not your best in my opinion. I like the lyrics and the beat but its missing something...maybe that guitar feel. This is good though you did a good job!

- You should try seeing if you can mix your voice with a guitar =O.

Wow...

This...is...your...first...song?!

- You are inSANE!!! I love this one too! I have got say you do awesome with that guitar thing! Very cool! No wonder this song have 6,000+ listens.

- Awesome job!!!